I did many more of these thumbnails in my sketchbook. These are the ones that I liked better than the rest, though I'm still not satisfied at all with the composition.. This is a really hard challenge and I'm so out of my comfort zone. Just have to push trough it to greater heights.
![[Image: compositional-thumbnails1-RoopeMaatta-wrulf.jpg]](http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/wrulf/compositional-thumbnails1-RoopeMaatta-wrulf.jpg)
I'm having trouble too - trying to improve with my composition work. I'm having a bit of trouble making out what a lot of the things are in your comps, so it's hard for me to tell you what looks best in terms of the narrative and visual representation. However I am drawn to 1 and 10, and also 3 because of the movement
Hey nice lot of thumbs mate. I'm leaning towards #4 right now, definitely got something about it that one. 12 also looks cool.
Difficult..
Thank you for your comments
![[Image: compositional-thumbnails2-Roope-Maatta--wrulf.jpg]](http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/wrulf/compositional-thumbnails2-Roope-Maatta--wrulf.jpg)
I'm so not satisfied at my current skill level shown in this piece. I feel distressed. But hey, now I know more clearly that I have to study so much more, with greater intensity, and organize my time better.
Well here it is, With so so so much room for improvement.
Final version and studies:
![[Image: bs5studies-roopemaatta-wrulf.jpg]](http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/wrulf/bs5studies-roopemaatta-wrulf.jpg)
![[Image: bloodsports-5-mononoke-RoopeMaatta.jpg]](http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/wrulf/bloodsports-5-mononoke-RoopeMaatta.jpg)