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RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-11-2013
30 sec gestures, gesture from imagination and trying out portrait value from imagination
RE: My Precioussss SB - Jaik - 12-15-2013
Main crit is to tell you to slow down. You are pumping out the work and I dont mean to slow down on how much you are working but maybe focus on your strokes a little more, try and get forms (i.e. cheekbones) to read properly. Try and make all of them look like the one of the top left. The gestures are looking good, a lot of motion in them. Pull out a loomis book as well, your placements are pretty accurate and the proportion is too, but you can always learn from the master :D
Keep going, you are going great :D
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-16-2013
jaik : thanks jaik, thats why i try to master study ruanjia to understand more about his strokes.
practicing gestures makes me remember about the days of copying many books like hogarth, bridgman, etc..slowly it cames back to my memory..
gestures for today, ruanjia master study, i really like his strokes..
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-17-2013
today gesture, ruanjia master study, and trying to apply it by making portrait from ref (from marcin wuu)
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-21-2013
gestures practice and master study zhaoming wu
RE: My Precioussss SB - Jaik - 12-22-2013
Wow that study 2 posts ago is great! Real improvement over your previous stuff! Nice job with the traditional looking brush work on the last portrait too. You should start applying them now and do some from your imagination or do a character piece or something similar. You will definitely see an improvement :)
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-23-2013
Jake : thank you jake, yeah, im trying from imagination, but still sucks hahaha, i'm gonna try it again though
gestures, burne hogarth study, and portrait study, some heads from imagination
RE: My Precioussss SB - Kaffer - 12-24-2013
Nice values!
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-24-2013
gestures today, and some portrait, try to render fei in realist..but it's sucks hahaha
RE: My Precioussss SB - Heavenwill - 12-24-2013
That's a lot of studies.. Awesome man keep it up
RE: My Precioussss SB - BenFlores - 12-28-2013
dont forget to apply and dont be afraid to show them because were all here to learn and fail. anyways, nice start to your sketchbook, i wanna see more! :)
RE: My Precioussss SB - Jaik - 12-29-2013
Good job man, theres a lot of improvement even since I have been here last. Your values are MUCH better. There are some problems with your craniums though. Do a couple skull studies and that'll fix you right up. For example, that male portrait in the last image looks like the top of his skull is missing. Good job though, seriously impressed at the speed with which you are improving!
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 12-29-2013
just gestures, hogarth study and rubens master study
RE: My Precioussss SB - ramalooke - 12-29-2013
Like how I could possibly miss your sketchbook. I love to see people with good hard working ethic. And you seem to be this person. Great gestures and value studies. I can see some nice improvements at a course of those two pages of your sketchbook. If you'll keep up with all updates and studies you'll become a beast. Best wishes mate!
RE: My Precioussss SB - razvanb08 - 12-30-2013
Awesome sketchbook! Keep it up with all the hard work!
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 01-01-2014
ramalooke : thank you for your encouragement man, lets keep up improve together rama.
razvanb08 : thank you man, let's keep improving.
gestures and just study from gravure photo
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 01-04-2014
gestures and trying color study, for future personal project
RE: My Precioussss SB - razvanb08 - 01-06-2014
Nice work man. Everything is looking better especially the faces!
Good job, keep it up!
RE: My Precioussss SB - Jaik - 01-06-2014
Nice job thus far. Really sticking to those gestures now. I really like the colours you put into the shadow areas on the back lit figure in the last one. Nice stuff. You might want to do some backgrounds with your characters though so that you can play a bit more with edges :)
RE: My Precioussss SB - rioriorio - 01-08-2014
has been slow these days