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RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - dwalkerart - 04-18-2012
(04-17-2012, 07:53 PM)Piotr Jasielski Wrote: Update!
It's almost done. I need to finish his arm, hat and do the background. I should adjust the composition a little too, since the colt is hugging the edge now and it doesn't look good.
Lookin fancy man, good job.
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - Piotr Jasielski - 04-18-2012
Thank You, dwalkerart :)
I forgot to mention that I'd also appreciate any critique. So if any of you has suggestions, please feel free to share them.
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - TK_EKS - 04-18-2012
(04-18-2012, 12:29 AM)Piotr Jasielski Wrote: Thank You, dwalkerart :)
I forgot to mention that I'd also appreciate any critique. So if any of you has suggestions, please feel free to share them.
i think i get what your trying to do with the gun (have it spinning?), but it feels placed.
*my 2 cents*
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - Max Swinton - 04-18-2012
Piotr, I agree that the gun appears to be just hanging on his finger rather than spinning, so it rather than looking cool it looks a little odd at the moment. Perhaps you could give the gun a little radial blur or something to quickly give it the impression of circular movement. Also, I'm not getting a clear sense of place from your background, so I would suggest that you make it more distinct to sell the concept.
Max
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - Piotr Jasielski - 04-18-2012
Thanks guys for the feedback. As for the gun, I agree, it desn't look like it's moving. I experimented a little with motion blur and smudgeing, but I didn't get results that would satisfy me. I'll try to fix it today.
Max, I didn't really touched the background yet, so no worries, I plant to place some cactuses and maybe some rocks there. Thanks anyway for pointing that out.
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - Chilingo - 04-19-2012
![[Image: 2ly1y8k.jpg]](http://i43.tinypic.com/2ly1y8k.jpg)
my studys and thumbs
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - TK_EKS - 04-19-2012
hello everyone , so iv been working last night and iv hit one of though , F#$5* stages were i dont think it looks good and the image is off. I have idea for the background , some dust action and motion but im just at a crossroads now. Im looking to get some feed back if anyone wants to help out.
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - joerdenleigh - 04-20-2012
Hey Guys here's my progress so far! I actually just watch "Rango" before this bp went up so i was like awesome !!! I watched "Wild Wild West" and also "I Robot" as well. I also went to the library and got a book on gas engines and old farm tractors so yay! I live streamed for a bit on this one too ! Best of luck id better detail like crazy cuz i can see that deadline.
![[Image: jleigh_bloodsport9_ref.jpg]](http://www.joerdenleigh.net/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/jleigh_bloodsport9_ref.jpg)
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RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - mateusrocha - 04-20-2012
Great works so far.
This are my studies for the Tex Mechs:
![[Image: 19_04_12_horse_studies_scans_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx76.jpg]](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/110/d/e/19_04_12_horse_studies_scans_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx76.jpg)
![[Image: tex_mechs_comps_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx9p.jpg]](http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/110/0/7/tex_mechs_comps_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx9p.jpg)
![[Image: 19_04_12_comp_final_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx5e.jpg]](http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/110/f/f/19_04_12_comp_final_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx5e.jpg)
![[Image: 19_04_12_robot_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx82.jpg]](http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/110/0/f/19_04_12_robot_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx82.jpg)
![[Image: 19_04_12_robots_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx8r.jpg]](http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/110/d/9/19_04_12_robots_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx8r.jpg)
![[Image: 19_04_12_cowboy_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx6m.jpg]](http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/110/a/8/19_04_12_cowboy_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx6m.jpg)
![[Image: 18_04_12_cowboys_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx4b.jpg]](http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/110/6/e/18_04_12_cowboys_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx4b.jpg)
![[Image: 19_04_12_tha_cowboy_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx8z.jpg]](http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/110/0/1/19_04_12_tha_cowboy_by_mateusrocha-d4wzx8z.jpg)
![[Image: 18_04_12_atom_by_mateusrocha-d4wzxzi.jpg]](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/110/e/c/18_04_12_atom_by_mateusrocha-d4wzxzi.jpg)
Final image will be showed tomorrow :3
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - Elektroschnitz3l - 04-21-2012
So, again I'll link my studies with my deviantart-Account :D
http://elektroschnitz3l.deviantart.com/gallery/36740954