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RE: CoreyH new SB - missimoinsane - 08-20-2015
Very impressive.. a real pleasure looking through your works!! Keep it up.. I look forward to more!
RE: CoreyH new SB - Bookend - 08-20-2015
Awesome work and studies! Don't stop da rockin'.
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RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 08-21-2015
Thanks guys :)
Some chow stuff, old stuff, 30 sec head gestures and crap
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 08-27-2015
chow stuffs
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 08-27-2015
update. hoping I get enough time to render it
RE: CoreyH new SB - Bookend - 08-27-2015
Wow, fantastic work. Great studies! My favourite is that lovely portrait of the girl-- Such warm colours you chose. Was a great choice. Keep up the good work, and keep working hard!
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 08-30-2015
Bookend - Thanks mate :)
had time for a few studies. Really polishing a turd with the CHOW so I'm going to abandon it and try again next week
RE: CoreyH new SB - Fedodika - 08-30-2015
haha love that design!
I like the pose of the top right ones in this too
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachment.php?aid=72706
hmm when i look at it, a lot of the edges are good; the left (his right) leg could be narrowed a little near the calf, and brought out more. The arms look cool :), also try adding some hard edges around the eye, maybe like an eyelid that is kind of dark and the glowing orange from the eyes wouldn't hit it, thus making the face less blurry feeling
I see you're trying to fade the loincloth, but i think it'd be a better idea to blend the cloth in the background, and try to keep the loincloth a solid more consistent gradient with more subtle value changes;
It's also good you're doing those leg studies, i really recommend looking at the dude you're working on now and the proportions of his legs; like try to imagine them without armor or clothes and you will see the calves are very short, and I also think you could raise his waist a little.
Also look at the edges on the nostrils on his nose; try to keep that consistenct with things, like the light following the form; but yea man, keep polishing it, the lines are looking nice in the studies :)
RE: CoreyH new SB - crackedskull - 08-31-2015
Chow looks pretty rad, good to see you studying legs, they are quite tough.
RE: CoreyH new SB - Archreux - 08-31-2015
Cool updates, I like that blue archer on the last page. It's got some great atmosphere.
Studies are looking good, too. Keep them up, and don't forget to apply some of those good learnings. The line work has gotten better from the last page as well!
RE: CoreyH new SB - Bookend - 08-31-2015
Those are some fantastic legs! Remember to think about every line you're putting down. Try to not-look, and try to put down a line on your own, and then look and compare, and correct.
Keep at it!
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 09-02-2015
Thanks guys :)
I wont have much time to study, 10 - 11 hour work days till November :( But ill try enter some competitions here with sketches.
Started this is for the 30 day challenge at lunch
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 09-03-2015
more lunch break shenanigans
RE: CoreyH new SB - IrishWhiskey - 09-05-2015
That progress!
Great job on the gestures, I'm really liking how fluid they are. I love your portraits too, they're near perfect from what I can see!
I can't see anything you need to work on so all I can say is keep going! you are doing Great
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 09-07-2015
Thanks IrishWhiskey :)
Birthdays and fathers day on the weekend. (I got my first ever fathers day presents and brekky in bed, whooo!)
Managed to get 30 mins in today so far that I can show.
Better than nothing I suppose, gotta finish all this NDA stuff :V
RE: CoreyH new SB - Punk-A-Cat - 09-07-2015
Totally loving your character concepts, they are rad :)
RE: CoreyH new SB - Bookend - 09-08-2015
I agree, really fun concepts. Lessee some more!
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 09-08-2015
Thanks guys. Having a bunch of fun doing them. Cool focusing pretty much only on design.
Another 30 mins on him this lunch
RE: CoreyH new SB - CoreyH - 09-09-2015
15 more mins
RE: CoreyH new SB - vlada - 09-09-2015
Oh man oh man I'm so excited about these steam knight sketches. Good luck with work! These are looking great, I'm catching a more whimsical Dark Souls vibe. B)