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RE: Terran it up....ehhh - atrenr - 10-04-2013
*sucking noise*
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Samszym - 10-05-2013
Man, the amount of work that must have gone into that last picture is just crazy!
really cool stuff! I think the stairs might be too high-contrast against the background right now, they're drawing my eye in but they don't seem like the most important thing in the picture.
keep up the good work :D
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Yarrnick - 10-07-2013
hey man, I see you've been busy studying clouds. I'm doing that aswell including water, and really its a bitch to render anything non solid i found out. Keep on pushing :)
:P I agree with Sam your last piece is getting impressive. I do feel like you need more forest on the left, or something. I'm not buying it that there is only 1 mountain ;P
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Finnjamin - 10-07-2013
Hey man, your sketchbook shows progress, but you already knew that.
*sucking noise*
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - atrenr - 10-24-2013
Thanks guys, while I agree with the points you made I had already decided to move on to the next stuff.
Been really slow lately on top of moving so I have just gotten an embearessing amount done. There are a couple others I'm gonna upload soon but this guy is "done". Probably gonna paint him.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - atrenr - 10-24-2013
Hit me like a drum. He-he-heyy! I feel the mumbooo~ I can't sleep. Bear.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - atrenr - 10-26-2013
Blind Bear ShamalamanFaroutseermaaaaaaaaaaan
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - holdkocos - 10-26-2013
nice one! :3
though i would play with the lineweight a little bit... ;)
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Samszym - 10-26-2013
I agree, some heavier lines and spots of black around places where there would be occlusion shadows would help this a lot. I'm digging the ornaments he's wearing, cool stuff! the arm leaning on the staff looks much longer than the other one
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - ramalooke - 10-26-2013
Love you're linework ;3 I agree with holdkocos. Some lineweight action would benefit your drawings. I like the design though. Great stuff, keep rockin'!
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Egbu - 10-28-2013
Love the design on the bear !:D, Also I agree with sam the arm looks slightly longer than the left.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - brianjohnson - 10-29-2013
These bears are great, and that latest enviro is fantastic. Keep it up.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - atrenr - 10-30-2013
Thanks for all the tips guys! Helps a lot, I'm still pretty new to drawing things out like this.
Can't believe that arm got by me, Sam! Completely unnoticed, thanks for the catch.
Taking a small break from the bears. Been doing a lot of traditional lately but my scanner apparently broke...damnit. So I did an afternoon study and lined out a longer one I wanna do. Can you guess where I got lazy? haha gonna have to do abunch of those, I'm overdue. Forgot how much I enjoy studies
More soon!
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Tygerson - 10-30-2013
Really like the armored bears--great rough hewn artistry. The weapons and armor suit them so well, one could see a bear making such a thing.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - atrenr - 11-02-2013
Thanks Tygerson! Trying to push 'em : )
So it's been about 1 year and 4 months since I "became an artist" and started painting. I've worked hard and learned a lot over the past year about myself as well as art. So much more to learn and discover however! Can't wait
Talent ain't shit. Work hard all day 'erry day, bitches
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - crackedskull - 11-03-2013
Great progress over the year dude. Keep it up.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Samarus - 11-03-2013
Much progress !
Awesome !
Keep it up !
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - BenFlores - 11-03-2013
dat progress <3 keep working hard man, it's motivating to see this.
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - smrr - 11-03-2013
YOU BEAUTIFUL MAN YOU!
Your improvement brought a tear to my eye :')
Keep ripping it up Terran!
P.s. thanks for the likeness tip, +rep !!
RE: Terran it up....ehhh - Amit Dutta - 11-03-2013
Nice progress in here mate. Those bears are sweeeet. Definitely play with line weight for next ones but yeah cool. Keep it up!