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Tekken fanart - Marduk: Gamechanger - sopasdigital - 07-12-2012 So here's what I've been up to today. This is my first digital painting that I really invested time on. So far I'm happy with what I've accomplished but I really need feedback on what else I can do to improve it (i.e. lighting, drapery, detail work, etc.) Any suggestions? Comments? Would love if someone can do a paintover to highlight what I need to work on. Thank you! RE: Tekken fanart - Marduk: Gamechanger - gumby - 07-12-2012 hey there ! good start. Here is a quick paintover. Your character in the front is really muscular, yet his back looks very flat. Adding more muscle definition would be beneficial i think. I made the front character and the back one intersect each other to add more depth and show that they will be engaged. Its not really clear whats going on with the guys in the background. Try working on them some more good luck and nice work :) [img][/img] RE: Tekken fanart - Marduk: Gamechanger - sopasdigital - 07-12-2012 Awesome! Thanks gumby! I shall work on that today! I'll be posting an update afterwards. Thank you!