I would greatly appreciate your criticue/advice on this sketch! - Printable Version +- Crimson Daggers — Art forum (//crimsondaggers.com/forum) +-- Forum: PERSONAL ARTWORK (//crimsondaggers.com/forum/forum-9.html) +--- Forum: SEEKING CRITIQUE/PAINTOVERS (//crimsondaggers.com/forum/forum-36.html) +--- Thread: I would greatly appreciate your criticue/advice on this sketch! (/thread-1914.html)

I would greatly appreciate your criticue/advice on this sketch! - DimikA - 01-12-2013 Hi, please tell me your oppinion on this. I'm trying to improve and every critique will be useful. Thank you for your time! photo sharing RE: I would greatly appreciate your criticue/advice on this sketch! - Heavenwill - 01-12-2013 Hey ! Watch out for the pose, it doesn't look very comfortable. It looks like his left arm is pushed in front of him because it doesn't fit the perspective. I tried also to resolve the pose, still strange around the waist area. Other than than I absolutely love the way you rendered the face and hands, great work there Hope it helps RE: I would greatly appreciate your criticue/advice on this sketch! - DimikA - 01-14-2013 Thank you, I'll be more careful with the pose and perspective in the next drawings I make. And the overpaint you did made the mistakes very obvios and helped me a lot.