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Fantasy Environment Thingy - Jaik - 03-25-2013

Hey everyone!

Been working on this for a while, decided to put it to bed and just call it done. If anyone has any suggestions on what to try and work on next time, anything I did wrong particularly, anything like that I would love your opinion on this piece!

[Image: 130325-10.jpg]

Higher res can be found on my deviantart if needed.

Thanks in advance!


RE: Fantasy Environment Thingy - Chiritsu - 03-26-2013

[Image: jaikpaint_01_zps5cc1153d.jpg]

Jaik! I love this piece tbh! lol. Here's a super quick paint over. It's not much of a change but it's a rough change.. hope you can see what I see? :o

Feel like it just needs to show more depth. Only did a rough edit here.. could maybe sue some more atmospherics between islands and a few sun beams streaming across??


RE: Fantasy Environment Thingy - ChantalFournier - 03-26-2013

The foreground needs to be significantly darker and more saturated than the middle ground. The main island should also be darker underneath, I think, because it's not close enough to something else to get bounce light. Other than that, it's pretty cool.