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Bloodsports 5 - Ponyo - nuno - 01-31-2012
A few compositions.
RE: Bloodsports 5 - Ponyo - CanisPanthera - 01-31-2012
So far I'm liking the last one the most. Since you have the triangle of light going width ways towards the kids, I would put some direction (maybe from fish) going toward them. I assume you want them to be the focal point but all the direction is leading towards the top right now
RE: Bloodsports 5 - Ponyo - nuno - 01-31-2012
Thanks a lot for your comment CanisPanthera, i'll keep what you said in mind. Right now i'm not too keen on that one, but i'll see how it turns out once i've done some studies.
Here's a study of the first composition o.O