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Double Team - Fake Card Illustration - Psychotime - 07-15-2013

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Ok, first critique thread at Crimson!

Last year I told myself Iā€™d make a wannabe card illustration of a few of my dumb characters, and this is the result of that. Attempted to fit a specific image size and all that.

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RE: Double Team - Fake Card Illustration - Madzia - 07-16-2013

Characters and background is so sweet, great job with it. The only thing is this object at the center. I totally don't understand what is it. Is it trash can? or an armchair with villain hidden in shadows
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I dunno I can see it with my imagination. It's probably because the characters eyes are directed to center and I can't accept they are looking on boring trashcan. It have to be something more!! xD


RE: Double Team - Fake Card Illustration - Psychotime - 07-16-2013

Sorry, just a trash can. I felt a foreground object that's mostly in silhouette would make a better composition.