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Freddy - IronOdin - 09-05-2013

Morning Brothers and Sisters!

This is my first official post to the forums after lurking for a few years.

Down to brass tacks. I've been working on a Freddy piece for the pure joy of it (I don't typically have time to work on my own stuff, but that's changing this year.)

I'm at a point where I need a set of fresh eyes and ask for your help! I'm torn between a low or high blue back light. I think the low one allows for a more interesting rim light...I dunno.

The glove needs a lot of work as well. I've been holding off on it.

Any suggestions are welcome. Thank you!

[Image: Freddy_51.jpg]
[Image: Freddy_41.jpg]

-Jon Alderink


RE: Freddy - Kaffer - 09-07-2013

Maybe more shadows under his hat's rim, and I'd put the edge lights around him, if there is such a strong back light..


RE: Freddy - Samszym - 09-09-2013

I'd try reversing the pose of his hand so the claws are pointing back towards his face instead of out of the image.


RE: Freddy - IronOdin - 09-09-2013

Huh. I'll have to do a little "draw over" to see how I like it. Hadn't thought of trying that!