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Bloodsports #5: Moving Castle - ShoZ - 02-03-2012
Hi there,
This is my first attempt in bloodsport, i did the thumbnail but it's realy hard to read for anyone who isn't in my head ^^
I did a first version :
As i wasn't satisfied with this i remade the composition to the begining here the new sketch :
RE: Bloodsports #5: Moving Castle - Tooth - 02-03-2012
Hey welcome!
I must say I really prefer your first sketch! The simple and bold value structure is working very well, however I'd rethink the design of the girl, Howl looks excellent though.
I don't feel your latest sketch has the same X-factor in terms of composition and lighting, also I feel the details are a bit scattered, as your first piece has a clear focus - I checked out your other work, great stuff, looking forward to seeing you grow!
RE: Bloodsports #5: Moving Castle - ShoZ - 02-03-2012
Hey thanks a lot alex, great to have ur comment, i think i'll keep the last one but change the values to make more focus on the center of the piece, thx for ur help.
RE: Bloodsports #5: Moving Castle - ShoZ - 02-04-2012
New ideas, here is the new cover, crits wanted pls :
