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forest spirit - gumby - 09-26-2013
Hey guys, im doing Leshii the forest spirit that likes to disturb travelers in Russian folklore. I have a few composition idea, but would like to know your opinion on them or the ones you like the most.
Thank you !
RE: forest spirit - roumenov - 09-27-2013
Lol, you bailed before I could answer your question on Noah's stream.
My personal favorite is bottom left. But if you want the encounter to seem really terrifying for the character/more dramatic, I think one of the top two is a better direction.
RE: forest spirit - Amit Dutta - 09-27-2013
Definitely one of the first two. Better comp. More narrative, nicer perspective.
RE: forest spirit - gumby - 09-28-2013
snap, i pushed one further before seeing your comments... Should i continue or backtrack and pick one of the two first ?
Thanks a lot !
RE: forest spirit - Wardy - 10-04-2013
looking nice! I love the perspective with the enlarged hand, great stuff. watch out for the tangent on the bottom of the canvas with the feet though, looks like hes resting his feet on the border. Perhaps some near foreground elements like grass?