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BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - JacobJanerka - 02-04-2012 What I've done so far for the challenge, Hoping to push it a lot further, any crits would be appreciated. Cheers <3 RE: BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - CanisPanthera - 02-04-2012 really nice studies! RE: BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - JacobJanerka - 02-04-2012 CanisPanthera Thanks man! More refinement RE: BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - Zaphk - 02-05-2012 Nice studies! I like the color palette you chose =) RE: BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - RachelCham - 02-05-2012 Nice work so far! Need to push the values on the final one though, it's all looking too light considering she's under trees. Some of that dappled shadow would look good (: RE: BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - Piotr Jasielski - 02-05-2012 I love Your color palette. You need to adjust contrast a little - push the darker parts and highlights, this way it'll read more like a 3d piece. I'm not comfortable with the placement of the character. I'd personally move her towards the center. Her upper body is also a little to small in comparison to the lower part (her belt could be a little lower). Skin tone on the neck is good - make it the tone of legs as well. Left part of the gun is in different perspective than the rest. Keep it up and good luck in the contest! --- Hey, I did a quick paintover to show what I'd do with values. RE: BS #5 Nausicaa of the valley of the wind - JacobJanerka - 02-10-2012 Thanks a lot guys for the crits it helped a lot :3 Here is my final so far, may try to push it a little bit more after I sleep on it and submit tomorrow.