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Imense Power Harsh Critique needed - imperatorm - 12-12-2013
Hi Does anyone have any Harsh Critique regarding this piece
or an idea as to how to push it further ?
RE: Imense Power Harsh Critique needed - meat - 12-13-2013
That's really nice piece! Is he powering up? Try having different shapes of the white triangles on the ground, maybe not so regular shapes, more like lightning, and try having more of them big, white triangles not just in the background, but also in the middle, near his feet, and in the foreground. Right now there are little traces, but if he's the source of the power surge, wouldn't the white stuff be most concentrated near him? Another thing to try is having this viewing angle changed to tilted, from an angle, to shake up the stable horizontal composition. More diagonal composition will feel more dynamic, like energetic, something's really happening right now! kind of feel.
RE: Imense Power Harsh Critique needed - darktiste - 12-13-2013
The wrist on the left is not working. Test it yourself it not that flexible
RE: Imense Power Harsh Critique needed - Mike086 - 12-13-2013
Your anatomy is off, pose in lighting and try to find the breaks.