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mononoke 1 - borishev - 02-10-2012 hi guys.first time here.hope to have time to finish till dedline. RE: mononoke 1 - levigilbert - 02-10-2012 Looks fantastic!! I love the composition and that wolf is really well rendered. My only thoughts are you should give the girl more of an emotion on her face instead of a blank look. Also Ashitaka should lean more into the movement of riding forward. I think it'd give it more of a sense of urgency. Can't wait to see this finished! |