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Would love some crits or such - MightCrawler - 10-05-2014
Would really like some crits on this, anything is healpful=)
RE: Would love some crits or such - meat - 10-09-2014
This ain't my specialty so not much I can give you except maybe add a few details like branch/squad insignia, numbers, name tag... : http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr241/samanushuke/USMC%20Gear/usmc_project.jpg
RE: Would love some crits or such - MightCrawler - 10-14-2014
(10-09-2014, 11:12 PM)meat Wrote: This ain't my specialty so not much I can give you except maybe add a few details like branch/squad insignia, numbers, name tag... : http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr241/samanushuke/USMC%20Gear/usmc_project.jpg
Thanks man =)
RE: Would love some crits or such - kyteki - 10-21-2014
It looks like you have a good start. The only thing I could think of is that you should be careful with the values you give to the costume. For example where his arms are crossed, I would make sure to get good contrast on the darkness of his sleeve material in comparison to the armor pieces on his shoulder and elbow. All that darker material of his outfit should be much darker than the lighter value armor pieces. You have a lot of detail in the drawing so far and it would be a shame to loose it in the rendering! Awesome drawing skills!