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Personal Project - marqueeadam - 11-08-2014
![[Image: asasasasasasa_zps344eedd1.jpg]](http://s1371.photobucket.com/user/Marquee_Adam/media/artwork/asasasasasasa_zps344eedd1.jpg.html)
hello guys, this is s personal project that I workin on
heavy inspired by Ghost In The Shell and Gantz, and lot of Rapoza's stuff too
this is my first time drawing robotic things, and I know there's mistake here, so I need your critique guys
thanks :D
RE: Personal Project - xpbonus - 11-10-2014
hey nice work just the lighting on her butt but yeah its quite good overall.[img]
![[Image: 2h6r69c.jpg]](http://i62.tinypic.com/2h6r69c.jpg)
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RE: Personal Project - Matt C - 11-11-2014
Be careful with her gun-hand, I'd really get some good reference for the fingers, which are sort of stumpy right now. Her other arm might be a tad long, or it feels like it warps once it turns translucent.
Its looking quite cool though, keep up the work!
RE: Personal Project - marqueeadam - 11-16-2014
(11-10-2014, 06:39 PM)xpbonus Wrote: hey nice work just the lighting on her butt but yeah its quite good overall.[img]
thanks man, I really need critiques for lightning since I'm so bad at it, thanks again :D
(11-11-2014, 05:48 PM)Matt C Wrote: Be careful with her gun-hand, I'd really get some good reference for the fingers, which are sort of stumpy right now. Her other arm might be a tad long, or it feels like it warps once it turns translucent.
Its looking quite cool though, keep up the work!
yes, I know it's bad but I lack of reference of hand with gun, I searched on Deviantart but no one fit for my drawing so I draw it just using reflection of my hand in the mirror, thanks for the correction :D