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Critiques are welcome - ShinOkami - 07-23-2015
Trying to limit my color palette and experimenting.
RE: Critiques are welcome - Tristan Berndt - 07-24-2015
Hey, man!
Color palette looks good, I think the biggest critique I have is the gesture/pose. Nobody really stands like that. Her arms are going off straight to her sides, her legs are far apart and it kinda looks like her hips are awkwardly tilted.
I did a paintover and gave her a more natural/serene pose to match her face. I also added more form to her torso to and slimed down that hair stuff. It's at that point where the size became comical so a little slimmer makes it look natural.
RE: Critiques are welcome - ShinOkami - 10-07-2015
Thanks for the overpaint, Tristan !
Here's something new. Your thoughts ?
RE: Critiques are welcome - ShinOkami - 08-25-2016
Some paintover or tips of how this piece could be better are welcome. :)
RE: Critiques are welcome - Jonesoda - 09-02-2016
Did a paintover for ya on my stream! hope it helps :)!
https://www.twitch.tv/russellrjones/v/87049991