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Stand by Me/The Body fanart WIP - help - kitexavier - 10-13-2015

Hi guys (firstly sorry about my bad english)

I'm doing an illustration of The body/Stand by Me (Stephen King), but I wanted to stay realistc illustration. I think that should further improve it over the colors, but I can not think what to do. Can you give me a hand?
[Image: aYKuxJD.png]


RE: Stand by Me/The Body fanart WIP - help - AlfonsoX - 10-15-2015

Thunder is not iluminating the floor -> boys dont have shadow -> they appear to be floating where legs meets ground