(01-22-2016, 04:06 AM)artistebot Wrote: This is an interesting piece, I think the focal point is the figures in the back? What is the narrative? I think you could try using a harder edge brush for the fog and some of the forms. Tempting to add a few rim light  edges, to help add interest too.

(01-24-2016, 09:19 PM)xelfereht Wrote: Hey, It's a nice piece rendering wise but it doesn't feel too interesting as far as narrative. If they're moving through the water you might see some ripples which would give a sense of movement and might make it more interesting. You could think of many reasons why these guys are in this place, maybe if you add some details to suggest what they are doing? I see guns, maybe you could add something in the image to suggest why they need the guns. it's nicely painted, there is just not much making me want to look at it for more than a few seconds which may be where the lack of response comes in.
I think you could improve it allot with a little more suggestion of story. Well done thus far!