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Not sure what to do - calicojack - 07-29-2016
This is probably the best thing I've ever made, but I still see things I'm not happy with and I'm not sure how to fix them. Actually about the only thing that looks right to me is the bottom half of the baseball bat. Any advice would be helpful!
RE: Not sure what to do - Piotr Jasielski - 07-29-2016
Hey,
you did pretty good job with reflections and lighting. My main problem is that the rendering looks a bit messy and blurred. Good example is his hand - that bit of a glove is disappearing like it was smudged. Same as the edges of his vest. Also shadows are a bit too dark - don't forget there is always some reflection from surroundings.
RE: Not sure what to do - calicojack - 07-29-2016
(07-29-2016, 02:21 AM)Piotr Jasielski Wrote: Hey,
you did pretty good job with reflections and lighting. My main problem is that the rendering looks a bit messy and blurred. Good example is his hand - that bit of a glove is disappearing like it was smudged. Same as the edges of his vest. Also shadows are a bit too dark - don't forget there is always some reflection from surroundings.
Thanks for the tips! I'll try and fix those things!