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Art Test WoTC...crit needed - Amit Dutta - 04-29-2012 Hey guys, I'm doing an enviro art test for WoTC to be submitted in about a day and a half or so. this is where i have got to so far...a bit of a wip progression. Haven't gone hardcore into detailing yet, just want to get the mood and comp perfect. I think I've lost the stronger comp diagonals from the middle one to the last, but I like the opening up of the environment and sense of space too. Any comments would be appreciated... Cheers! RE: Art Test WoTC...crit needed - Amit Dutta - 04-30-2012 Ha overwhelming number of replies....guess I cut it too fine asking for crit. This is what i submitted anyhow. RE: Art Test WoTC...crit needed - Laura_H - 05-02-2012 I really like your final one, the banners add a nice touch of movement into the piece and bring the eye in to the building nicely. RE: Art Test WoTC...crit needed - DertyPaws - 05-02-2012 Hey Monkeybread, Good finish. One thing I would have said about your earlier piece was no clear area of focus but you resolved that with the building detail + lights and the flags are a bonus. Good luck! |