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Life Drawing Critique - JosephCow - 05-09-2018
Hi, I'm new. have been working on life drawings in class for a while, haven't had a critique. Would love to hear any thoughts, whether general impressions of my work, what I might be missing. Or specific errors.
RE: Life Drawing Critique - Toranja - 05-11-2018
Hey Joseph, I'd recommend learning some anatomy, the structure is looking ok but there are oversimplifications happening in the outlines and shadow shapes that don't make much sense considering what should be there.
RE: Life Drawing Critique - JosephCow - 05-12-2018
(05-11-2018, 07:48 AM)Toranja Wrote: Hey Joseph, I'd recommend learning some anatomy, the structure is looking ok but there are oversimplifications happening in the outlines and shadow shapes that don't make much sense considering what should be there.
Okay, I will, thank you!
RE: Life Drawing Critique - prince0-100 - 06-20-2022
Hey man if you wanna improve the lighting this might help:
https://www.dorian-iten.com/
And if you are focusing only on the figures proportions, forms and not about the lighting this steve huston video might help render your art just to look nice: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQ6nXdpj1zI)