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Lady in blue - DanHell - 05-23-2012
So I finished this a couple of days ago, feedback would be really nice.
![[Image: highresver04.jpg]](http://i1257.photobucket.com/albums/ii515/danhellart/highresver04.jpg)
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![[Image: closeupver4-2.jpg]](http://i1257.photobucket.com/albums/ii515/danhellart/closeupver4-2.jpg)
RE: Lady in blue - Knights End - 06-05-2012
(05-23-2012, 05:54 PM)DanHell Wrote: So I finished this a couple of days ago, feedback would be really nice.
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It looks sharp! My only crit is the shadow under the jaw on the left side of her face. It feels very solid (not shadow-like) with a hard geometric line. It needs more fall off, even if it is supposed to be harsh lighting and a more organic shadow line to follow the curvature/musculature of her face. Also, it is the only dark shadow on her. The rest of her body has very even lighting. So you need to either lighten he jaw shadow a great deal or add more shading to the rest of her body or some combination therein.
Overall, great work!