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Garda von Dornring - Yefimia - 07-08-2021
Hello everyone. This is my first post here. I was wondering if someone could give me some pointers for this illustration that I did for © Beyond World GmbH. :) Maybe I can use some these tipps to implement them in future work.
I was looking for an option to discuss art in a smaller group setting, as Discord groups can feel quite overwhelming for me. Maybe we can even make some friends. :)
I'm excited for your feedback!
RE: Garda von Dornring - darktiste - 07-09-2021
The stone look flat i think i a matter of how many side you show of an object plus the overlapping of the lady hide part of the object which might create a even worst situation.She look kinda tall for a old lady if he back was to be arched that way.But apart from that i don't notice anything to dramatic.I really like the serene feeling i could almost imagine a bird flying over to her to sit on her shoulder.
RE: Garda von Dornring - Yefimia - 07-11-2021
Thanks, I'm glad you see a serene feeling. :)
After the brief she's supposed to be really tall but with a hunchback and has to emit a sense of strength from her past years. I agree with the stone looking flat a bit, if that is what you mean, but I'm not really sure what to do about it. There was not a lot of space in the format and the stone is also supposed to look rather big.