07-16-2012, 03:48 PM
There were a few things I was trying to accomplish with this piece.
First, foreshortening; I'm not 100% sure I accomplished that, It still looks like the hand and the guy are at the same distance. I don't know if its the color or detail.
Second, narrative. I was trying for creepy... like he's trying to grab you, but it just looks like a guy reaching out to me.
Third, composition. I do think an environment would help the composition as well as the narrative, but I have yet to think of a scene to place him in.
Help please.
![[Image: robo_reach3.jpg]](http://zae1x.com/sketches/robo_reach3.jpg)
First, foreshortening; I'm not 100% sure I accomplished that, It still looks like the hand and the guy are at the same distance. I don't know if its the color or detail.
Second, narrative. I was trying for creepy... like he's trying to grab you, but it just looks like a guy reaching out to me.
Third, composition. I do think an environment would help the composition as well as the narrative, but I have yet to think of a scene to place him in.
Help please.