09-12-2012, 07:06 PM
your picture is very mono-chromatic. you could have the glowing orb shine on the person more, so she (looks female) is in some orange light. also maybe you want to flip her so she isnt pointing out of the picture.
then your background isnt very much defined, in fact not very much is defined. maybe that is intentional, but there could be more going on, like more fireflies (I guess that is what that red orb is) flying around.
keep pushing the idea and try to get a clearer vision and story. you have a good start. :)
then your background isnt very much defined, in fact not very much is defined. maybe that is intentional, but there could be more going on, like more fireflies (I guess that is what that red orb is) flying around.
keep pushing the idea and try to get a clearer vision and story. you have a good start. :)