04-01-2019, 01:00 PM
For me, the main issue right now is composition and going back to the idea of everything being relative. The composition feels off because everyone is different sizes. Cyborg, the biggest of them all, is smaller than Robin. BB is also at an awkward position where he's no quite in the middle of the composition, but he's close enough that it ends up looking off.
Below in the spoiler tag I did a quick idea for a comp for it, mainly to show how the piece would benefit from everyone being relative in size from one and other. Sorry, it's super ugly and looks like a dogs breakfast lmao, but hopefully it'll give you an idea of what I'm talking about. I'm really no expert in composition, so take it with a grain of salt :P
I agree that the values feel samey. Just keep pushing it and making sure the values of the characters stand out from the background :)
Below in the spoiler tag I did a quick idea for a comp for it, mainly to show how the piece would benefit from everyone being relative in size from one and other. Sorry, it's super ugly and looks like a dogs breakfast lmao, but hopefully it'll give you an idea of what I'm talking about. I'm really no expert in composition, so take it with a grain of salt :P
I agree that the values feel samey. Just keep pushing it and making sure the values of the characters stand out from the background :)
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Spoiler![[Image: tumblr_pp9h9rhwuA1xxah6io1_540.jpg]](https://66.media.tumblr.com/6f9814fb0f19676f92bac3b6d6780c82/tumblr_pp9h9rhwuA1xxah6io1_540.jpg)