[° ~ °] Nicks art dump

[Felime]

Some really good stuff here, but this one isn't really working for me. I think it's partially the same issue as the eyeball monster, the slight tilts are flattened out in places, namely the hips. I feel like the symmetry and straight on view there really hurts the gesture, and it contributes to the perspective feeling off. (I think the foot sizes are off as well.) And I'd work on the helmet and surrounding area. It's roughly as close to the viewer as her head, but it feels like there's no way in hell she could cram her head in, which throws off the entire arm for me.

Some fiddly things: The sharp, breast encasing upside down V shape of the bottom of the breastplate both makes the boobplate really obviously sexualized and removes the illusion that it's even vaguely functional, (But I dislike boobplates in general. YMMV.) and, more importantly, injects this really sharp, jarring shape into the very center of the generally really organic, smooth curves of your design.

And finally: Watch your tangents. The shadow from her head lines up exactly with the curve of the armor on her shoulder, and it reads as an asymmetrical, toga style thing until you look closely.