06-13-2016, 09:03 AM
Hey Varbas. Awesome improvement in this page alone, the studies are paying off.
I did paintover of your riven painting.
![[Image: ihCdBPj.png]](http://i.imgur.com/ihCdBPj.png)
The biggest issue was that the neck was too short, it is still off. You can also separate the subjects (foreground head,riven,background thing) through value grouping. This makes depth easier to read. You can also push the materials further by expanding your value range.
I did paintover of your riven painting.
The biggest issue was that the neck was too short, it is still off. You can also separate the subjects (foreground head,riven,background thing) through value grouping. This makes depth easier to read. You can also push the materials further by expanding your value range.