05-22-2016, 08:44 AM
Hi Luis.
I like your design decisions on your last piece. I think you have a good grasp on perspective, although there are times where it looks like you went a bit freestyle and went against it (e.g. like the streaks on the side, the nose does not look symmetrical). I know it's tough, especially when handling mechanical stuff, but there are sections of the drawing where you make it look easy. I'm confident you can hammer things down better the next time around!
And your line weight decisions can use a bit of work. General rule of thumb is, if it's nearer the camera, the line is thicker. The farther it is, the lines get thinner. Pull that off and it will help sell a sense of depth in your works.
Your craft looks promising! Here's to hoping for more!
I like your design decisions on your last piece. I think you have a good grasp on perspective, although there are times where it looks like you went a bit freestyle and went against it (e.g. like the streaks on the side, the nose does not look symmetrical). I know it's tough, especially when handling mechanical stuff, but there are sections of the drawing where you make it look easy. I'm confident you can hammer things down better the next time around!
And your line weight decisions can use a bit of work. General rule of thumb is, if it's nearer the camera, the line is thicker. The farther it is, the lines get thinner. Pull that off and it will help sell a sense of depth in your works.
Your craft looks promising! Here's to hoping for more!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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