Looking for some thoughts and crits
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I agree, you did a good job with rendering and lighting the face, and though imo you could have some more soft and lost edges in there to make it feel less sterile, this style is something that reminds me of what a lot of cardart looks like, so if that's where you're trying to go with it don't let me stop you.
A lot of things have already been pointed out by admbrns (wait, is that like a mock-phonetic way of spelling adam berns/burns or something?) or covered by Zipfelzeus' paintover, but one issue that hasn't been mentioned yet is the texture of the hair. You could make it feel more like a lot of individual threads of hair forming a big mass by simply adding a few strands sitting on top of the general mass of hair, following the form of the head, and by showing that the hair is growing out of the head by hinting at the skin underneath where it parts. Also, remember the hairline.

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Looking for some thoughts and crits - by varbas - 09-02-2016, 11:01 PM
RE: Looking for some thoughts and crits - by Lodratio - 09-16-2016, 06:46 AM

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