12-18-2016, 04:33 AM
Basing off the reference you gave, I noticed the body is a lot larger in comparison to the head (which might be why the shoulders look off). I've also shifted the pendant to the right to emphasize the volume of her chest, as well as touched her face to reflect her head being looked at at a downwards angle. The shadow beneath her chin could be raised up or lowered-- just so it doesn't tangent right with the clavicle area.
Watch the hairline-- its a tad hard to tell the hairstyle you're going for.
Just nitpicky things, but hope it helps a little. You've got a very Fedodika way of drawing faces.