Klinck's sketchbook

[darktiste]

Nothing particularly out of place good job and you took some little artistic choose that actually enhance the overall piece.This is up to you but i feel like the hair is maybe the area where you didn't render as far as it could be but that just me trying to push your limit.Sometime putting soft where there should be harder edge.I also feeling like you lost that transition around the edge of the hairline that really give that transition from hairline to hair mass and some of that messiness of the hair but i think here it more of artistic choose to remove some of that messiness you didn't wanted to go for magazine look.It depend on what was your intention photo realism or photo pleasing.