Some critiques about the anatomy and perspective about a card game art

[Johall_Ryber]

Would be interesting to see the art when it scale down to the card size.Like are we talking about super size card or tiny mini card... the format is important for the read.Nothing can fix art that aren't plan to read in the right size.


I think anatomy wise as well as perspective pass the first look test but the background is going to tell use if you can handle perspective or not.I think it would be a good idea to solve the background before moving on orchanging anything.Not a particular fan of the read of the breastplate right now it leaking indication as to how you going to solve the volume.

 
The card i think, gonna has 9 cm of width for 5 cm for lenght.I hope that's fit well.

Sorry,sir, but i didn't got what you said about the breastplate.I need move the breastplate or change the size of it?