02-18-2013, 05:50 AM
haha to tell you the truth, i think composition is my weakest point.
But i will try to help, i think the comp would be much more powerful if you add more action to the scene and stablish a focal point in the center of the composition.
For example, you could make the assasing blocking the mouth of the soldier and backstabbing him, maybe with the blade emerging from his torso.
But maybe thats too bloody. :P
Short version: add some action, stablish a central point of attention and add some elements in the background to lead the eye to the focal point.
But i will try to help, i think the comp would be much more powerful if you add more action to the scene and stablish a focal point in the center of the composition.
For example, you could make the assasing blocking the mouth of the soldier and backstabbing him, maybe with the blade emerging from his torso.
But maybe thats too bloody. :P
Short version: add some action, stablish a central point of attention and add some elements in the background to lead the eye to the focal point.
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