06-03-2016, 07:09 AM
Accepting the crit that you need the most can be a tough pill to swallow. I think you're brushing off what username said too easily. You've done a lot of value studies. I really commend you on your work ethic but if rendering was really your problem dont you think you'd have figured it out by now? Knowing how to render involves understanding how light falls across a form. If you dont understand the form completely then how will you know how light will fall across it? Looking through your sketchbook I cant see any studies of you tackling perspective head on. You really need to try and construct figures from the ground up with a lot more thought.