Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff
First impression

Scale and perspective of the tree seem off on that witch piece and i feel like you give to much room for little detail to take away from the focus of the story telling.

Here some of the touch up i did.


I Increase the shadow inside the lower ground.

I Add up some fog in the foreground to counter balance the strong foreground element.

Overall i made the character more darker to make it pop against the light background.

And Work in away to assure that i keep the focus toward the face of the character


For suggestion
 i would say try to add some kind of leaf trail behind her to show movement so it not so ''static'' 

Finally simplify your shape to help the composition.


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Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Elderscroller - 01-07-2013, 09:58 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Annamoon - 01-09-2013, 09:19 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by gdsworld - 01-12-2013, 11:04 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Jaik - 01-12-2013, 06:48 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by leonardZC - 01-12-2013, 09:11 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Mannequin - 01-18-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Archreux - 01-21-2013, 04:55 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Wolkenfels - 02-19-2013, 01:08 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by foxflake - 03-13-2013, 05:25 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Othrandir - 05-10-2013, 01:48 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Apart95 - 05-10-2013, 05:55 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Heavenwill - 05-16-2013, 04:56 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by iCi - 05-17-2013, 09:02 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Heavenwill - 06-03-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Damien Levs - 06-10-2013, 07:41 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Wingal - 06-17-2013, 10:34 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Toxicpanda - 06-17-2013, 05:56 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Lex_paul - 07-03-2013, 06:16 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Tygerson - 07-05-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by MajaD - 07-06-2013, 09:09 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Tygerson - 09-05-2013, 02:53 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by florentK - 08-28-2013, 03:00 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Archreux - 09-02-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 09-07-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by smrr - 09-13-2013, 06:51 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Kaffer - 09-16-2013, 09:05 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Prabu - 09-23-2013, 01:48 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by RyeBread - 09-25-2013, 03:14 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Elif - 10-08-2013, 10:00 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Elaeis - 10-09-2013, 01:19 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adzerak - 12-04-2013, 12:41 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 12-05-2013, 02:54 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Tygerson - 12-11-2013, 04:05 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by ramalooke - 12-14-2013, 04:50 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by ramalooke - 12-16-2013, 05:28 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by wla91 - 12-23-2013, 03:57 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Sir-lex - 01-10-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Zipfelzeus - 01-11-2014, 12:02 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by razvanb08 - 01-14-2014, 06:28 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adzerak - 01-15-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Kaffer - 01-21-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by meat - 01-23-2014, 02:51 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 02-07-2014, 04:44 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 02-14-2014, 03:57 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Lionsketch - 02-19-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 03-06-2014, 04:00 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Wolkenfels - 03-28-2014, 07:39 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Kaycee - 03-25-2014, 10:30 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Archreux - 04-05-2014, 05:04 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 04-09-2014, 03:30 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 04-10-2014, 02:34 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by meat - 04-17-2014, 10:19 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 04-27-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Wolkenfels - 05-06-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 05-22-2014, 05:14 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 05-23-2014, 02:30 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 06-04-2014, 05:10 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 06-05-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Cruptic - 06-05-2014, 04:07 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Othrandir - 06-07-2014, 03:02 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Samszym - 06-24-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Kaffer - 06-24-2014, 08:02 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by JeanDoe - 07-26-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 07-31-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Jaik - 09-02-2014, 02:17 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Mr. Toodles - 09-05-2014, 08:25 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Wolkenfels - 09-24-2014, 08:20 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by pnate - 10-09-2014, 11:18 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Craig Paton - 10-10-2014, 02:22 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 10-11-2014, 12:17 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Craig Paton - 11-02-2014, 02:54 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by maggie - 11-29-2014, 08:46 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 12-15-2014, 09:44 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 12-15-2014, 11:13 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 12-18-2014, 07:20 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 12-24-2014, 01:47 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Archreux - 12-24-2014, 09:25 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by devinn - 01-18-2015, 05:34 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Agerkvist - 02-11-2015, 05:15 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Agerkvist - 02-16-2015, 10:57 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Pookaball - 02-18-2015, 03:41 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Kir - 06-27-2015, 03:43 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Zearthus - 07-22-2015, 09:18 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by smrr - 07-22-2015, 08:30 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 08-10-2015, 07:00 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 08-11-2015, 06:45 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 08-28-2015, 12:50 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Agerkvist - 09-05-2015, 03:07 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 09-12-2015, 09:26 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 09-21-2015, 06:10 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bart - 09-29-2015, 08:37 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Bookend - 10-15-2015, 07:57 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by smrr - 10-21-2015, 08:09 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by DQ_Nick - 11-09-2015, 08:58 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by phainting - 12-02-2015, 02:36 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Eyliana - 12-16-2015, 03:57 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Vornag - 01-02-2016, 10:08 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by meat - 01-02-2016, 02:57 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by AlCo - 01-10-2016, 10:04 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Mechanizoid - 01-10-2016, 10:28 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by iJeffrey - 01-16-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Eyliana - 02-10-2016, 05:21 PM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by cgmythology - 03-01-2016, 02:30 PM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Liberty - 03-29-2016, 12:24 AM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 04-19-2016, 07:47 PM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Eyliana - 05-12-2016, 05:37 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by smrr - 05-20-2016, 12:27 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by username - 05-31-2016, 02:21 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 06-03-2016, 07:09 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by OtherMuzz - 06-04-2016, 08:27 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by OtherMuzz - 06-07-2016, 03:38 PM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by John - 06-07-2016, 09:27 PM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Artloader - 07-15-2016, 09:02 AM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by CHARLE PRSN - 09-12-2016, 01:57 AM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Fedodika - 11-03-2016, 01:38 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Adam Lina - 11-09-2016, 12:51 PM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Kaiko - 02-03-2017, 04:21 AM
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RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Artloader - 05-11-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff - by Xenzo - 05-23-2017, 05:29 AM
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