03-18-2014, 10:31 PM
I think your teacher has a point, the appearance is that your first concern in these was the clean lines. sort of looks like you weren't paying enough attention to finding structure or anatomy because you were getting that clean finish. I think doing that under-drawing with cylinders and box-like forms while focusing of the figure's balance and weight distribution would help you place the figure in space better and loosen up some more. It's not that making clean lines is a problem and you have to go messier, it's just that you're putting the cart before the horse in a way, a clean finish is probably the last thing you should be worrying about.
Anyway, awesome stuff! Really impressed by those bloodsport thumbnails, that's so much work and variety :0 Keep it up!
Anyway, awesome stuff! Really impressed by those bloodsport thumbnails, that's so much work and variety :0 Keep it up!