03-23-2014, 04:17 AM
Damn, so much improvement over a few pages. You've been absolutely killing it, there's no doubt there.
Your sketchbook pages are so inspiring, and in so much volume at that.
If I could give a small crit on Shallan: There's something about the eyes, I don't know if it's the placement, but they look as if they're crossed and looking at us at the same time. Maybe the spacing between them is just a bit awkward. There's something there so it'd be worth experimenting with for a bit to see what happens.
Great stuff. Can't wait to see all these chars finished! :]]]
Your sketchbook pages are so inspiring, and in so much volume at that.
If I could give a small crit on Shallan: There's something about the eyes, I don't know if it's the placement, but they look as if they're crossed and looking at us at the same time. Maybe the spacing between them is just a bit awkward. There's something there so it'd be worth experimenting with for a bit to see what happens.
Great stuff. Can't wait to see all these chars finished! :]]]