02-24-2019, 01:50 PM
Just a quick crit, the light bands don't really travel across her form and background correctly. If the building is behind her the light edges shouldn't just continue directly across in a straight line; there would be some offset. Same deal across the plane changes of her torso. Unless I'm mistaking the intent of what those are?
Definitely think the light bands are overpowering the quite nice value structure and generally might not even be necessary! A more diffuse light for the bands or even changing to a spotlight could work better.The fingers are a bit awkward esp her right hand.
The photobash could be integrated a little better perhaps? Try putting it through a...damn...I forget the right filter name for PS or Painter...but one that simplifies the shapes to various levels and reduces sharp edges. In Krita it's an 'oil paint' filter.
But generally this is a huge step up dude. Lots of nice things happening in the figure and lighting.
Definitely think the light bands are overpowering the quite nice value structure and generally might not even be necessary! A more diffuse light for the bands or even changing to a spotlight could work better.The fingers are a bit awkward esp her right hand.
The photobash could be integrated a little better perhaps? Try putting it through a...damn...I forget the right filter name for PS or Painter...but one that simplifies the shapes to various levels and reduces sharp edges. In Krita it's an 'oil paint' filter.
But generally this is a huge step up dude. Lots of nice things happening in the figure and lighting.