06-15-2019, 04:00 PM
If i am correct you have drawn the plate75&76 of andrew loomis -drawing for the head.For male figure i think the only comment i would have is how much forehead you gave them i think it to big.Also younger man have much rounded looking face feature than adult.
Now for plate 76 the women. The mouth is a bit croocked on the drawing on the left her face is bigger and longer than it should be the hair is also squash down probably due to bad framing.I think you might have a tendancy to draw longer nose on female chracter.The jawline should be redone in my opinion.
Sadly i think you have lose alot of the soft value transition due to the camera and lighting.I recommend to close the window for the next time you take phto and have an ajustable lamp so that you can try to recover some of those lost value.I myself use a scanner and i recommend getting one if you can it a tool that give alot of respect to the work i believe.Not only does it help you archieve the work you do you can then transfer from a traditional medium to a digital medium with much more ease.
To end on a good note i think you really show that you consider my critic and have tried to improve on the issue i have brought foward it show that not only do you value critic but that you actually work to correct those tendancy if you judge them worth to be corrected.
Now for plate 76 the women. The mouth is a bit croocked on the drawing on the left her face is bigger and longer than it should be the hair is also squash down probably due to bad framing.I think you might have a tendancy to draw longer nose on female chracter.The jawline should be redone in my opinion.
Sadly i think you have lose alot of the soft value transition due to the camera and lighting.I recommend to close the window for the next time you take phto and have an ajustable lamp so that you can try to recover some of those lost value.I myself use a scanner and i recommend getting one if you can it a tool that give alot of respect to the work i believe.Not only does it help you archieve the work you do you can then transfer from a traditional medium to a digital medium with much more ease.
To end on a good note i think you really show that you consider my critic and have tried to improve on the issue i have brought foward it show that not only do you value critic but that you actually work to correct those tendancy if you judge them worth to be corrected.
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Teamwork make your dream work.
Asking help is the key to growth.