08-12-2019, 03:12 PM
I want to bring attention to how you represented the countour of the neck to have to much an angular rythme to it instead of a nice smooth pattern of curve.Specially on the left side.Your shoulder rythme also doesn't resemble the reference.I think the clavicule form is also no totally done you have given it a much more stronger shadow but if you look at the reference from top to bottom the pattern is shadow and the form roll without an other shadow of a same intensity.An other issue is the rythme of the Sterno mastoid muscle where it attach on the sternum near the base of the neck could be more curved than what you indicated.
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