11-10-2018, 02:23 AM
Hi Darktiste, Its cool that you spend some time doing hair design, but why do you use a template? Did you do it? I think drawing a more realistic face yourself would help train your anatomy, since you re looking to be a creature designer.
While it may be a stylistic choice, I think adding some volume to your hair (like loomis for example) , would help selling it. What I notice first is that there is no hairline in all of them except one, but in the clean looking symmetrical cut like the third for example you would have one in the center. Also, I think it would be cool to have some overlapping strand that suggest volume. You probably know that, if yes please ignore, drawing hair from a photo and simplifying them in simple mass could help greatly in stylizing them.
While it may be a stylistic choice, I think adding some volume to your hair (like loomis for example) , would help selling it. What I notice first is that there is no hairline in all of them except one, but in the clean looking symmetrical cut like the third for example you would have one in the center. Also, I think it would be cool to have some overlapping strand that suggest volume. You probably know that, if yes please ignore, drawing hair from a photo and simplifying them in simple mass could help greatly in stylizing them.