11-21-2018, 12:56 AM
The front on you are missing a lot of stuff like, the center adams apple area, should show form even in superficial muscle drawings, as you seemed to show bones in the back of the trapezius.
https://i.pinimg.com/236x/cd/4e/40/cd4e4...rawing.jpg
For the front, the cords of the trapezius dont wrap so far over the clavicular area, that is mostly hollow , and you didnt show it attaching to the clavicle. The way you indicated the bottom of the sternomastecloid doesnt show it comfortably going into the clavicle, its thinner at the bottom and comes out on a much further slant to the right before it thins out into the ear.
For the back, you drew the chords of the trapezius going into the skull way too thin at the top, the trapezius is also much wider at the sides, and yes the sternomastecloids are visibe from that angle but they are further to the sides of the skull, thicker and nearly covered by the trapezius
Side view has the sternomasticloid going too far out, it comes in closer to the clavicular insertion. same with the trapezius being too small... im not sure if youre using reference with these but i highly reccomend you pay more attention to the bone landmarks and try your best for a 1 to 1 representation of the subject
https://neurologicalsurgery.in/wp-conten...-Nerve.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/3e/32/20/...c71fef.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/236x/cd/4e/40/cd4e4...rawing.jpg
For the front, the cords of the trapezius dont wrap so far over the clavicular area, that is mostly hollow , and you didnt show it attaching to the clavicle. The way you indicated the bottom of the sternomastecloid doesnt show it comfortably going into the clavicle, its thinner at the bottom and comes out on a much further slant to the right before it thins out into the ear.
For the back, you drew the chords of the trapezius going into the skull way too thin at the top, the trapezius is also much wider at the sides, and yes the sternomastecloids are visibe from that angle but they are further to the sides of the skull, thicker and nearly covered by the trapezius
Side view has the sternomasticloid going too far out, it comes in closer to the clavicular insertion. same with the trapezius being too small... im not sure if youre using reference with these but i highly reccomend you pay more attention to the bone landmarks and try your best for a 1 to 1 representation of the subject
https://neurologicalsurgery.in/wp-conten...-Nerve.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/3e/32/20/...c71fef.jpg
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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