Forrest's Sketchbook of Wondercanes and Dreamsicles.

[Jonas Jerde]

Hey man, your rendering is looking nice.

I think you biggest problem right now is the stiffness that is apparent in a lot of your work. There's a lack of flow, and perhaps too much lasso tool (ultra sharp edges). I would suggest trying to get a little looser in your work, maybe lose some detail in certain areas. I think once you get past that, your looking pretty solid.

Good luck, have fun :)