07-12-2018, 01:55 AM
awesome! some of these are really nice; pay attention to little things in the forms for instance
The back pose on the bottom left, make sure that trapezius is sitting properly on top of the ribcage, the muscle does not depress into the rib cage it sits on top of it, the rib pushes the form out, and the shoulder blades sit on top of it. I think the one to the top right of that is the best one, the forms are all in place, same with the gesture
Also pay attention to symmetry and how forms are aligning. Some of your heads are too big or too small, but you'll see that as time goes on. So yea, just push the gesture more, the curvature of the line of action, i see some stiffness here and there. Theres a good few vids on Youtube of Steve huston, he really explains it well ;)
The back pose on the bottom left, make sure that trapezius is sitting properly on top of the ribcage, the muscle does not depress into the rib cage it sits on top of it, the rib pushes the form out, and the shoulder blades sit on top of it. I think the one to the top right of that is the best one, the forms are all in place, same with the gesture
Also pay attention to symmetry and how forms are aligning. Some of your heads are too big or too small, but you'll see that as time goes on. So yea, just push the gesture more, the curvature of the line of action, i see some stiffness here and there. Theres a good few vids on Youtube of Steve huston, he really explains it well ;)
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