09-27-2018, 10:14 AM
Hey Echo! Your warhammer piece is going in the right direction, needing some love and refinement but nice.
Regarding the lady concept, i can´t put the finger on what does make me really really like the concept but i really do.
I would suggest a few tweaks with her, so i did a paintover, hope you don´t mind
A) Anatomy. Her face is lovely, her torso is nice but the arms are a bit off anatomywise. Same with her leg, her leg suits better a spartan haha. Just kiddin. Just a few tweaks and it´s ready to go.
B) Balance. The uniformity and the visual weight equilibrium is there but the cape/triangle shape is quite disconnected from the lady. Perharps trying to change it a little bit. It´s too strict haha.
C) Composition. The composition works really well. Just a few tweaks to enhance it, prehaprs breaking the strict shap and bring a few organic shapes instead.
D) Drama. There is a connection between the lady and the wolf but i´m not feeling it. Perharps closing the cape on the wolf could create a sense of care, protection, leader of the pack type of feeling. By breaking the strictness it may provide the message that the wolf cares for the lady and the lady for the wolf.
By toning down value, brining contrast to enhance their bond the drama aspect could be better introduced into the picture.
I´m not really a big fan of over the top 1-10 value ranges black to almost white but i think it may really work quite well in this piece.
- The night sky enriches the foreground and enhances silhouette.
- The bright light hitting the wolf and her face and torso.
- By toning down/ creating lost edges on the bottom part, guides the viewer to the upper frame.
- Rim light helps hightinght the silhouette.
Just my two cents, hope it helps haha!
Regarding the lady concept, i can´t put the finger on what does make me really really like the concept but i really do.
I would suggest a few tweaks with her, so i did a paintover, hope you don´t mind
A) Anatomy. Her face is lovely, her torso is nice but the arms are a bit off anatomywise. Same with her leg, her leg suits better a spartan haha. Just kiddin. Just a few tweaks and it´s ready to go.
B) Balance. The uniformity and the visual weight equilibrium is there but the cape/triangle shape is quite disconnected from the lady. Perharps trying to change it a little bit. It´s too strict haha.
C) Composition. The composition works really well. Just a few tweaks to enhance it, prehaprs breaking the strict shap and bring a few organic shapes instead.
D) Drama. There is a connection between the lady and the wolf but i´m not feeling it. Perharps closing the cape on the wolf could create a sense of care, protection, leader of the pack type of feeling. By breaking the strictness it may provide the message that the wolf cares for the lady and the lady for the wolf.
By toning down value, brining contrast to enhance their bond the drama aspect could be better introduced into the picture.
I´m not really a big fan of over the top 1-10 value ranges black to almost white but i think it may really work quite well in this piece.
- The night sky enriches the foreground and enhances silhouette.
- The bright light hitting the wolf and her face and torso.
- By toning down/ creating lost edges on the bottom part, guides the viewer to the upper frame.
- Rim light helps hightinght the silhouette.
Just my two cents, hope it helps haha!