Feeling like a loser
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Hey, nice progress. I think somewhere along the way in your rendering you got a bit lost in the detail of each segment because the perspective on the woman seems a bit off now. I think you have lost a sense of form wrapping around in perspective and foreshortening as a whole because the render seems a bit too flat. Check out her white abdominal plate, or her fabric belts, they all look like flat cutouts. The rings in the belt really show the foreshortening and perspective to be off and this makes her torso look misaligned with her legs as a whole, even though the contours of the figure are pretty good.

Maybe because of this, the two characters don't quite fit the same perspective. For the guy, as a design thing, I find that there isn't much reason for him to have only one huge shoulder armour, even though i quite like the shape, but that's just a preference.

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Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 04-26-2015, 07:51 PM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Adam Lina - 04-26-2015, 11:04 PM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 04-26-2015, 11:44 PM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Adam Lina - 04-27-2015, 12:15 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 04-27-2015, 12:31 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Adam Lina - 04-27-2015, 12:52 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Patrick Gaumond - 04-27-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Jeso - 04-27-2015, 04:44 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by RickRichards - 04-27-2015, 06:21 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 04-27-2015, 05:16 PM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Jeso - 04-28-2015, 02:47 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 04-28-2015, 03:05 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Amit Dutta - 04-27-2015, 08:55 PM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 04-27-2015, 09:52 PM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Amit Dutta - 04-29-2015, 06:41 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 05-06-2015, 02:05 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Amit Dutta - 05-06-2015, 06:08 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 05-11-2015, 02:00 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by Amit Dutta - 05-11-2015, 07:00 AM
RE: Feeling like a loser - by mimimimi - 05-11-2015, 05:01 PM

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